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Etznab
2021-11-09 00:52:47 UTC
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I think you need a proof reader to correct the many typos in your online article.

http://www.ffcas.net/-the--minnesotan---cult---eckankar

2nd and 3rd paragraphs have issues.

And then there's this.

"Klemp belongs on a federal pen. We intend to see he is incarcerated in one."

My God. Try to write in basic English first. Belongs on a federal pen?
Etznab
2021-11-09 01:04:45 UTC
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Post by Etznab
I think you need a proof reader to correct the many typos in your online article.
http://www.ffcas.net/-the--minnesotan---cult---eckankar
2nd and 3rd paragraphs have issues.
And then there's this.
"Klemp belongs on a federal pen. We intend to see he is incarcerated in one."
My God. Try to write in basic English first. Belongs on a federal pen?
And what does this mean?

782
days since
Eckankar litigation starts

Is that supposed to be "started"? Something doesn't look right about that sentence.

Is somebody going out of their way to appear challenged by the English language?
Advice Team
2021-11-24 19:33:14 UTC
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Post by Etznab
Post by Etznab
I think you need a proof reader to correct the many typos in your online article.
http://www.ffcas.net/-the--minnesotan---cult---eckankar
2nd and 3rd paragraphs have issues.
And then there's this.
"Klemp belongs on a federal pen. We intend to see he is incarcerated in one."
My God. Try to write in basic English first. Belongs on a federal pen?
And what does this mean?
782
days since
Eckankar litigation starts
Is that supposed to be "started"? Something doesn't look right about that sentence.
Is somebody going out of their way to appear challenged by the English language?
Thanks for your comments. The site is being reviewed and rewritten.
Advice Team
2021-11-24 19:32:57 UTC
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Post by Etznab
I think you need a proof reader to correct the many typos in your online article.
http://www.ffcas.net/-the--minnesotan---cult---eckankar
2nd and 3rd paragraphs have issues.
And then there's this.
Thanks for your comments. The site is being reviewed and rewritten.
Post by Etznab
"Klemp belongs on a federal pen. We intend to see he is incarcerated in one."
My God. Try to write in basic English first. Belongs on a federal pen?
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